Selasa, 08 April 2014


identifying narrative paragraphwith and without topic sentence



Message in My Trip

Last week I went to Gunung Sugih in central Lampung with my father to made affidavits police records. I went to there at 13.00 pm. (orientation)
When I arrived there I have to waited to get the form, after that I was waiting in line to get finger print formula. When I was finished filling out the form and fingerprinting formula I am waiting to get the affidavits police records, and after waiting turn, Finaly I called to get the letter. After that me and my father back to home, but when we want to go back home, not far from there my motorcycle was off. Turns out after my father check, fuel is used up. So we have to push the motorcycle until 50 yards to got petrol. In the middle of a trip we got rainy, so we took shelter in a house. We waited until the rain was over. While we waited, I and my father talked about my future. My father said that I have to reach my dream. I have to study hard, do the best and pray to god. He said that everything that I will do is my choice, and the result of it is mine, and the parent just supports, facilitating, and praying for. That was the message from my father to me. Because the rain was over, we continue to come home. In the middle of a trip I thought about the message from my father, from that I realized that my parent is very important for me, they always support what I do, they prayed to god for my happiness. (complication) Finally we arrived in punggur, me and my father ate meatball before arrived at home. Although we got in our rainy Trek, but I can got some enlightenment, that my parent is the most important people in my life who always supporting everything that I do. (resolution)

Analyze the text

Theme                     :  message
Introducing             : Last week I went to Gunung Sugih in central Lampung with my father to made affidavits police records. I went to there at 13.00 pm.
Plot                         : continue
Characters               : I and my father
Setting                     : -place              : police station
                                   -time              : last week
                                   -situation       : serious
Climax                  : in my trip I get some message from my father for my future
Conclution             : we arrived in punggur, me and my father ate meatball before arrived at home. Although we got in our rainy Trek, but I can got some enlightenment, that my parent is the most important people in my life who always supporting everything that I do.

The purpose of this text : to entertain the readers about my story “message in my trip”
Supporting sentences :
- I went to Gunung Sugih in central Lampung with my father to made affidavits police records.
- I arrived there I have to waited to get the form
- I was waiting in line to get finger print formula.
- I was finished filling out the form and fingerprinting formula
- I called to get the letter.
- We took shelter in a house. We waited until the rain was over.
- We waited, I and my father talked about my future. My father said that I have to reach my dream. I have to study hard, do the best and pray to god. He said that everything that I will do is my choice, and the result of it is mine, and the parent just supports, facilitating, and praying for.
- I can got some enlightenment, that my parent is the most important people in my life who always supporting everything that I do.


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